Monday, March 3, 2014

Mr. Charlie



Mr. Charlie
Caught an eel
Off of the Hendrixon’s dock
At the bend in the river.

He was trying for catfish
But the eel must’ve 
Been hiding under a root
Or in the crevice of a rock
And got first dibs
On the chicken livers
Mr. Charlie
Dangled from 
A cheap used pole
He bought in the thrift section
Of the gas station
In town.

The eel was oily
With bottom-feeding slime
And lively
With consternation
Wrapping itself 
Around Mr. Charlie’s arm
Tightly.

He struggled to work the sucker off
Pressing down
At the back of it’s head
With his worn boot
To get the hook 
From the eel’s mouth.

He worked his pliers 
At the steel hook
Like a skilled surgeon
And held it up in the air
For inspection
After freeing it.

He made quick work
Of getting
The apode
Into the pail
Of river water
That sat next to him.

Mr. Charlie’s ‘Jaunt’ cologne was strong
In the afternoon heat
Overpowering the smell of eel slime
Chicken livers
And fish bones on the shore
As he wondered what the Mrs.
Was going to think
About having eel
For dinner that night.

2 comments:

  1. Another raw experience captured. I used to fish with my father and the things we caught, giant gar. Inedible, but I am sure the Asian community eats eel, gar, and carp (giant Koi). Your descriptions are great.

    Elizabeth

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